by Blissful   Dec 8, 2011

Arctic romance tempts
as innocence slowly melts
in winters cocoon


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  • 6 years ago

    by PoetryKnight

    Nice, a 5/5 indeed. cant really say much more. i cant really critic it. good job, keep writting, and ill keep reading

  • 6 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    Loved it :) 5/5

  • 6 years ago

    by Decayed

    That was really melodious, I can instantly be tempted by such haikus. It's different and well.. so oriignal. great piece.

  • 6 years ago

    by Melpomene


    Not so keen on the title either but we both know you're more of the romantic at heart than I am so it works well with the emotions you encompass within the poem.

    This is quite beautiful and it's a pleasure to read something new from you. I love Haiku/Senyru poetry and the atmosphere you created within the poem was both delicate and warm even though it referenced the cold. You did well with the contrasts of cold and warm it created the idea of summer and winter and then of course alone and together, apart then in love.

    For such a short poem the imagery within this was great, I adored the reference to the cocoon and while this is a love poem I also found that it was deeper in the idea's of love, it was almost a piece of sexual tension from my perspective.

    Lovely write

  • 6 years ago

    by The Prince

    Not keen on the title but great word choice! No critique here, just nicely chosen lexis. Delicate phrasing too. Maybe the title should fit the tone. I enjoyed this sweet and simple write, lovely :)

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