Derelict Cretins delivered

by A lonely soul   Dec 8, 2011


Dreams delivered,
from a dashing dude called JANIS, who finally brought
deliverance to this derelict band of donnish drunks
doodling their driveling daydreams
and dangling dilettantish muses
on a doozy domain called PnQ.

An alliteration for the Creator of this website.

Helpful Diction:

cretins: clods, idiots
deliverance: the act of being rescued/freed
derelict: abandoned, neglected
donnish: scholarly, bookish or pedantic
doodling: scribbling/drawing aimlessly
driveling: slobbering, stupid, garbage, crap, rubbish
dilettantish: amateurish
doozy: unique, outstanding

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  • 5 years ago

    by Ms Happiness

    Its great, I love the alliteration:)

    Dreams delivered,
    from a dashing dude called JANIS, who finally brought
    deliverance to this derelict band of donnish drunks
    doodling their driveling daydreams
    and dangling dilettantish muses
    on a doozy domain called PnQ.
    ^^^
    this is my fav part:P hhhh that means all of it.
    Ofc a 5/5

  • 5 years ago

    by Decayed

    A great alliterative piece. It talks about something common in PnQ... well, with your sense of humor the vibes are there, and so are the concealed messages :)

    Great job.

  • 5 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This is funny lol

  • 5 years ago

    by L

    This is a well thought poem, Its short compare to other poems I've seen from this author but it has a message well conveyed.
    I have to admit that I sense a humorous tone in this poem but that's what I like the most about it.

    " doodling their driveling daydreams" lol.