This is a well thought poem, Its short compare to other poems I've seen from this author but it has a message well conveyed.
I have to admit that I sense a humorous tone in this poem but that's what I like the most about it.

" doodling their driveling daydreams" lol.

This is funny lol

A great alliterative piece. It talks about something common in PnQ... well, with your sense of humor the vibes are there, and so are the concealed messages :)

Great job.

Its great, I love the alliteration:)

Dreams delivered,
from a dashing dude called JANIS, who finally brought
deliverance to this derelict band of donnish drunks
doodling their driveling daydreams
and dangling dilettantish muses
on a doozy domain called PnQ.
^^^
this is my fav part:P hhhh that means all of it.
Ofc a 5/5