Zombie [Acrostic]

Zap! All
Other emotions have died

*I'd change "have" to "has"*

Making this apathetic
Babble colorless.

*I love this part!!! :O Great choice of words.*

Inanimate heart-beats
Empty into a grave of blankness.

*Really great poem hun. You captured the word so well and I can really relate to this. Keep it up. -Nik

Amazing, such a small verse yet such a very rich one. I am getting used to your style, and falling for it. I love the way you pen down your thoughts, very neat!

hats off..

Metaphor for heartbreak?

"Inanimate heart-beats
Empty into a grave of blankness"

Graphic, desolate, morose, perfect!

Did you deliberately keep this poem to 31 syllables? That's the length of a tanka.

I love zombie movies

but this made me sad for them

hehe.

but nice description like it 5/5