Fodah

WOW!!!

When I read poetry like this I literally swoon all over the place like a love sick fool!

I can't even finish this comment cuz my words are all fuzzy....it's like I've gotten drunk on the perfection of your stanza's.

HA.....Fodah is the inspiration of my Yaki, Fodah is the winning poem on the front page next week!

Fodah is the beautiful poem by yaki, Fodah is Yaki! Fodah is aa mix of the cutest verses ever, the deepest emotions, the most unique love. the impressive word choice, and the extra touching poem!

fodah is the lucky human being...

:) well done

Wow Yaki

Fodah
is the name
of the castle built
inside of my soul..

- I love that you talk about an imaginary castle inside your soul, that's a beautiful description.

Its the name
of the habitat
I belong in

- And this is just lovely, we all wish to have an habitat were we belong in, someone's heart.

The question mark
engraved in this
zealous heart of mine,
that is stuck like an anchor
in an endless sea..

- Wow stuck like an anchor in a endless sea? how did you come up with that lol this is creative, it really is :)

Fodah,
are the footsteps
I trace back whenever
life becomes a bitter
remedy-

- Awww this is just sweet, no flaws with it.

Whenever my eyes
become lazy,

Fodah is the dream
I slip into,
the coma I do not
want to come back from.

- A coma is not a good thing but you turn it into a lovely one just by saying you'll dream about him, and it's cute when you say your become lazy.

Its no use to modernize old love..

still ,
Fodah is the timeless emotion
I can not get rid of.

- Then it's a good emotion, you really make it shine through in this lovely poem.