Comments : A Picture For My Brother

  • 12 years ago

    by Paul Gondwe

    Great piece..though its long, i read it all..

  • 12 years ago

    by Still Slightly Broken

    Thank you! I realise its not a poem but this is where I have always posted my work so I thought, Why not!

  • 12 years ago

    by Still Slightly Broken

    Thank you! I realise its not a poem but this is where I have always posted my work so I thought, Why not!

  • 12 years ago

    by Fire Catches

    "I could learn another Eminem song off by heart and perform if for bottles of shampoo"

    I laughed a little at this part because it's so true when singing in the shower.

    Good job and I hope you receive a good grade for your paper.