But in the end there it flies
swarming about with nothing in mind.
Vivid it's wings, bright gold and black
enjoying a life so pure and free.
this was my fav line, ur good at what u do Joe, the wording was wonderful, the imagery as well was superb. I enjoyed this piece.
6 years ago
I love the symbolism of the hummingbird which you portray so well Joe, inside your poem- resurrection and rebirth. Everytime I see one- I am sure they are from the other side bringing us this message. I was face to face with one and it looked like a big moth with a beak, staring right at me and instantly I think of those who have passed. Loved it Joe. Take Care
Oh my gosh, this piece is absolutely fantastic! I love the imagery and description, they really are amazing. I agree that the word choice is stunning, and it created a magnificent piece. Excellent job, 5/5