I love how you used the hummingbird as the viewing of you & me.

Showing how the bird just flies around living its life, enjoying the freedom. Watching as life happens around him.

Great Job :)
5/5

There is something in this poem that gives you this warm, lovely feeling. The more times I read it, the more I love it.

But my favorite lines were those:
"In a world so affectionate yet rude
comes and goes, cycling through
life, death, and even you."
^^
This to me felt so personal and deep.

Always a fan of your work, great piece Joe.

5/5 and a nomination from me :)

Wow this is great I loved it and interestingly done,,great description and awesome poem it was a delightful read and beautiful,,greatly done :) 5/5

This is very beautiful, I love it so much, I love your word choice and I love the way you organized your thoughts. the images you came up with and the flow ? ...breathtaking!

CLAPS**a nominatioon too on tuesday

Oh my gosh, this piece is absolutely fantastic! I love the imagery and description, they really are amazing. I agree that the word choice is stunning, and it created a magnificent piece. Excellent job, 5/5

I love the symbolism of the hummingbird which you portray so well Joe, inside your poem- resurrection and rebirth. Everytime I see one- I am sure they are from the other side bringing us this message. I was face to face with one and it looked like a big moth with a beak, staring right at me and instantly I think of those who have passed. Loved it Joe. Take Care
Lostlove

But in the end there it flies
swarming about with nothing in mind.
Vivid it's wings, bright gold and black
enjoying a life so pure and free.

this was my fav line, ur good at what u do Joe, the wording was wonderful, the imagery as well was superb. I enjoyed this piece.

This poem really speaks to reader and opens up their heart a little. It is an enjoyable piece that I could read over and over.

Faultless

5/5

Imagery here is beautiful. Your words are very melodious.

Em