Wow! You have every reason to be proud of this poem. I loved it! The whole idea of it and the words you chose it just flowed amazing and I am actually going to put this in my favs. It is different from your normal style but i think it is amazing and very artistic. Telling a story about a story. I think that classifies as brilliance. ;-)

What a wonderful creative write. I loved your rhyme and easy flow. It has magic and emotion. Really good job