Zenith (haiku)

Oh be still my nature heart! What a beautiful haiku!! So elegant~ very nice!

I could've of have swear that I left a comment on this one. Ah.. I guess I didn't press the submit on my ipod. . .

Okay, I really like reading haiku's. They are short and sweet, well depending on the author. And you accomplish taht with this piece. I really like it.

I really love the imagery you have set so well in this piece.

It is such a beautiful nature filled haiku which are amazing to me.

I usually picture these water blossoms in soothing water but when you mentioned the waves I loved it even more because to me, a new image in my head was formed!

Well done

Haiku is your favorite type of poetry, and you express yourself beautifully through it.

White water blossoms surfing the ocean waves whilst the moon reflects, the sunlight directly above them.

Words are short, but the beauty is unmatched.

Very well written bro.

Awesome haiku
i love how short these r and they become beautiful poems

:)