Comments : Zenith (haiku)

  • 12 years ago

    by xoxShorteexox

    Impressive and descriptive writing skills like always, hun. Love the nature themes that you keep doing.

    5/5

    -Heather

  • 12 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    Wow I really loved this short but amazing :) and sooo BeAuTiFuL,,it's written and worded greatly a fantastic job from a fantastic poem I bet u should take anything and turn it into something :) 5/5 brilliant work

  • 12 years ago

    by Sylvia

    A lovely image white water blossoms riding atop waves. I will never again look at those whitecaps the same way after reading this. Nice job.

  • 12 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    A very calming picture framed in my mind, beautiful, elegant and flows together so well. Wonderful imagery and that white blossom just fills me with joy! Thanks for the smile :)

    Take care

  • 12 years ago

    by NightFlyer

    Its amazing how much imagery lies in the brief words of a haiku. A vivid moving image of water blossoms riding the waves, illuminated by the moon, fllls my mind when I read this. Nice haiku. This makes me want to try writing them!

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    I so feel tempted by nature poems, especially if they were this small and this vivid. I love it.

  • 12 years ago

    by Cinnamonspice

    Wow you're amazing. This just made me smile. I've never thought of white caps as blossoms. what a mind you have :-) excellent

    Connie

  • 12 years ago

    by Whatever works

    Awesome haiku
    i love how short these r and they become beautiful poems

    :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Exostosis

    Haiku is your favorite type of poetry, and you express yourself beautifully through it.

    White water blossoms surfing the ocean waves whilst the moon reflects, the sunlight directly above them.

    Words are short, but the beauty is unmatched.

    Very well written bro.

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    I really love the imagery you have set so well in this piece.

    It is such a beautiful nature filled haiku which are amazing to me.

    I usually picture these water blossoms in soothing water but when you mentioned the waves I loved it even more because to me, a new image in my head was formed!

    Well done

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    I could've of have swear that I left a comment on this one. Ah.. I guess I didn't press the submit on my ipod. . .

    Okay, I really like reading haiku's. They are short and sweet, well depending on the author. And you accomplish taht with this piece. I really like it.

  • 12 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Oh be still my nature heart! What a beautiful haiku!! So elegant~ very nice!