Comments : Woes of Heartbreak (the 'Whats')

  • 12 years ago

    by Karla

    Loved your piece.

  • 12 years ago

    by Kips2.0

    Thanks Kayla

  • 11 years ago

    by Xanthe

    "Do you cry when you know
    your tears will neither bring
    the dead love back to life nor
    initiate the inception of a new one?"

    Wow just wow.. I don't understand why this piece has so few votes and comments. The stanza I quoted above had the most effective impact on me. Very relatable. "Dead love" is beautifully well-penned, if not sad. How you formed the question with your command of words is just awe-inspiring, let me tell you.
    And the ending: superb!

    Beautifully written. Keep writing!!!
    -X

  • 11 years ago

    by Kips2.0

    Thanks for the candid comment.