That Was Such An Amazing Story. And What A Subject! You Are Truely Gifted And Now Thats One Of My Favorite Short Stories. If Only There Was A Time Machine And We Could All Go Back And Fix The Biggest Accidents Like That. Great Job!
TEar* tear* give me a fe minuites to wipe my eyes... no joke... i ams eriously crying... sisterly love is what i feel right now.... that story touched my heart so much... i can't believe that you wrote such a story... it is wow... amazing i mean it was really good... heart warming.. touch worthy... oscaring winning<< thats for sure! Story... so u wrote it for english what did u recieve on it~ ALways
I don't know what I got on it :-( He never gave it back, so I had to write it from memory. Never told me if it was good or not neither, that's why I put it on here. I knew that you guys would be honest. So Thanks! :-)