Comments : My Last Chance* Part 2

  • 13 years ago

    by Amy

    omg that was the best story ive ever read. u rock!

  • 13 years ago

    by Rolo

    dude!!! that was soo awesome. I never wanted to stop reading it! You can do it all...you're great!

    ~rolo

  • 13 years ago

    by Daphne Darling

    This is a great piece of work you’re an excellent writer and have great talent.

  • 13 years ago

    by Vanessa

    hey Im so glad you wrote another part to that story! It was REALLY good and your a great writter keep it up=)

  • 13 years ago

    by *~*Jackie J*~*

    WOW THE SECOND PART WAS THE BEST GOOD THING THAT YOU SAVED HER. YOU REALLY DIO KNOW HOW TO EXPRESS YOUR SELF. AND THAT'S AMAIZING. GOOD JOB AND KEEP IT UP.
    LOVE, JACQUELINE JIMENEZ, L.O.L

  • 13 years ago

    by Emily Strickland

    That Was Such An Amazing Story. And What A Subject! You Are Truely Gifted And Now Thats One Of My Favorite Short Stories. If Only There Was A Time Machine And We Could All Go Back And Fix The Biggest Accidents Like That. Great Job!

  • 13 years ago

    by JS

    that was one of the best things i've read on this website! Keep it up!

  • 13 years ago

    by *K~L~C*

    both of them were sssooooo good! ur very talented! if u were to write a book or something i will be the first to buy and read it!

  • 13 years ago

    by Alyssa Aka: lyssa

    TEar* tear* give me a fe minuites to wipe my eyes... no joke... i ams eriously crying... sisterly love is what i feel right now.... that story touched my heart so much... i can't believe that you wrote such a story... it is wow... amazing i mean it was really good... heart warming.. touch worthy... oscaring winning<< thats for sure! Story... so u wrote it for english what did u recieve on it~ ALways
    Lyssa

  • 13 years ago

    by Danielle

    I don't know what I got on it :-( He never gave it back, so I had to write it from memory. Never told me if it was good or not neither, that's why I put it on here. I knew that you guys would be honest. So Thanks! :-)

  • 13 years ago

    by Unseen Exposure


    Sad... but uplifting! I wish we all could get a hold of a time machine, and change the past.

  • 13 years ago

    by Brandy Sansotta

    That was amazing! I loved it

  • 13 years ago

    by ~DyingBlackRose~

    I loved it!!!

  • what can i say! you did a fantastic job for this story! omg it was so good... i absolutly loved it! :o]

  • 12 years ago

    by amanda

    good job hunn, i've read it before, i'm just goin through all your stuff again... good job

  • 12 years ago

    by Justin

    Great poem I like it alot