I like this poem a lot Hailey. Though it is really sad but it is filled with your hearts emotion. The feelings of death are there from the start. You show you want to die right away and it's sad though I know this is true. I love the knife in your skin though. It shows a lot of dark imagery. Yes it is a sin for suicide but sometimes it's hard not to have these feelings.I like how you say the demons eat at your soul. The demons could be represented as depression or sadness. You are growing more and more numb which makes you feel cold.
Life is very difficult and I understand why you need to get out. The pain is sometimes so overwhelming you can't do anything about it. You say you are going to hell but it seems in reality you are already there. Blood has frozen in your veins and there is nothing you can do. You want to scream but its all on the inside. You want to have a good life but it's ending here. We are all beauty inside and it's hard to see though. You are beautiful and strong. I know you have overcome so much from this poem. You eant to be done with this pain and that is great. 5/5
Darkly darkly..wonderful write. maybe its my own cynical taste. i simply loved this. if these are your true feelings then i am sorry you feel that way. but on another note the sheer insanity of this poem, the longing and suffering was wonderful. my favorite so far!