What a creepy, dark poem you have here! So awesome what you are doing with the prompts, that is incredible! I love the rhyme here and felt the flow was awesome.. SO eerie!

Yes, dark and creepy but so cool! The flow is stunning. The word choice is magnificent. It is a terrific piece and I'm on my way to read more, because I love this piece. The creativity and emotion in the piece really pull it to greater depths than I would have imagined. Not to mention how enticing the piece is.

5/5 of course.

Very Nicely Done, Kudos!!!

Skeletal fingers, stroking twisted thoughts
right in front of our eyes...

- eww, creepy image lol. You have such an imagitive way with words.

I loved the rhyme scheme, it made it flow nice.

Andrea, what a fabulous dark piece you have here.

skeletal fingers, stroking twisted thoughts
right in front of our eyes...
^^
Loved this, creepy.

Em