Comments : Dancing Sisters of the Sea

  • 5 years ago

    by Britt

    What a creepy, dark poem you have here! So awesome what you are doing with the prompts, that is incredible! I love the rhyme here and felt the flow was awesome.. SO eerie!

  • 5 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Yes, dark and creepy but so cool! The flow is stunning. The word choice is magnificent. It is a terrific piece and I'm on my way to read more, because I love this piece. The creativity and emotion in the piece really pull it to greater depths than I would have imagined. Not to mention how enticing the piece is.

    5/5 of course.

  • 5 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Very Nicely Done, Kudos!!!

  • 5 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Skeletal fingers, stroking twisted thoughts
    right in front of our eyes...

    - eww, creepy image lol. You have such an imagitive way with words.

    I loved the rhyme scheme, it made it flow nice.

  • 11 months ago

    by Em

    Andrea, what a fabulous dark piece you have here.

    skeletal fingers, stroking twisted thoughts
    right in front of our eyes...
    ^^
    Loved this, creepy.

    Em