What a creepy, dark poem you have here! So awesome what you are doing with the prompts, that is incredible! I love the rhyme here and felt the flow was awesome.. SO eerie!
6 years ago
Yes, dark and creepy but so cool! The flow is stunning. The word choice is magnificent. It is a terrific piece and I'm on my way to read more, because I love this piece. The creativity and emotion in the piece really pull it to greater depths than I would have imagined. Not to mention how enticing the piece is.