Comments : Midnight Dance at the Cricket's Ball (Ottava Rima)

  • 12 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Nice Work!!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Karla

    I am captivated with mother moon

    So am I

    Blessed Be!

  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Very nicely done. you penned a wonderful image ,, vivid and precise in the readers mind. Excellent format, good work

  • 12 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    I loved the imagery ... of night kisses, silken leaves and mother moon. Beautiful write.

  • 11 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Love this one! such a beautiful poem about mother nature and you express your love for her in such an amazing way. I love the idea of a crickets ball, I can picture this in my head and makes me think what really goes with creatures out there that we have no idea about!

    Lovely poem. I will have to try to do some of these forms some day.