Sinful Level

by Whispy.Gypsy   Jan 3, 2012


You called me a s**t you called me a w***e
i slamed your face right in that door
dont denie the lies you told
i hope you rot and turn cold

i thought u were there i thought u, i could trust
no more did i think you would be tied in lust
dont come back dont cry to me
for now you shall be what you never want to see

i dont care for you any more your just a loss
not my fault not my faite you cross
you denied the Him you took the Devil
now you will suffer on a sinful level

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  • 12 years ago

    by Whispy.Gypsy

    If you say 5/5 y does it say 0/0

  • 12 years ago

    by Hollow Face

    Very good. I like the detail and the emotion in this piece. But the spelling shows that you were writing this fast. Overall I like it. Even if it's to me. But I don't understand the 'lust' part. I don't recall ever falling for someone you like. Also how did I take the devil? 5/5 from me

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