Pain

by Vanessa   Jun 25, 2004


Pain
I closed my eyes and clenched my fist
As I brought down the blade to cut my wrist
I felt a tear falling
As I hear the blood dropping
I was feeling agony and pain
As I watch the blood flow all over again
I won't stop the flow of blood
I hope you forgive this sin, beloved God
I still try to smile
But I do it for just a while
But when I’m on my room, I do it all over again
And I would feel the rushing pain
Please God help me
Coz this agony won't let me free…

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  • 19 years ago

    by Ironic Allure

    Hmm. I'm sorry to tell you, I don't really like this poem. Due to the irregularity of the length of your lines, the poem doesn't flow to well, making it fairly difficult to read. The thought behind it is good, but I think it could use a little more work. Well done anyway :) Take care.

  • 19 years ago

    by vanessarrr

    this is really powerful. hope you don't do it in real life. remember that some1 cares. like me! take care:)

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