this is really powerful. hope you don't do it in real life. remember that some1 cares. like me! take care:)

Hmm. I'm sorry to tell you, I don't really like this poem. Due to the irregularity of the length of your lines, the poem doesn't flow to well, making it fairly difficult to read. The thought behind it is good, but I think it could use a little more work. Well done anyway :) Take care.