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by Rachit Bhanage   Jan 5, 2012


Hath found u 16
An Angel of my dreams..
Saw u in the sunshine smiles''
Experienced the love_
For the first time miles !
An eternal Essence
That can never be seen..
Why so much I Love U ?
Sometimes I think:
As I m to U
Completely UNSEEN.......

-7/4/09
(This Was The Very First Poetry I Wrote)

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  • 12 years ago

    by Marvellous

    It's really a common disaster to be overwhelmed in fantasies unrecognized.. Good job gem..

  • 12 years ago

    by marina14

    <3 cute. nice job :)

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    Not bad, it was good.

  • 12 years ago

    by Paul Gondwe

    Considering it was your first, you did really well. Its sweet and loved how you describe your angel who you are unseen to. Great work

  • 12 years ago

    by ImperfectlyBeautiful

    Very cute<3

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