Love Makes Me....

by Poet on the Piano   Jan 7, 2012


Love makes me
chase....
laugh.....
run further....
regret.

Uncertainty makes me
weak.....
then strong.....
decisive.....
alone.

Hope makes me
a friend.....
a onetime thought...
an extra eye...
a fading resolution.

Love makes me
near him....
heart already
opened......
desolate....
just a ghost

looking through all
I've not clearly
been capable
of.

-1/6/2012.

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  • 5 years ago

    by Ruby Red Memories

    This poem is great. It is really original and refeshing to read.

    What I liked most about the poem was how you kept things simple. You can see a lot of time went into the poem but you didn't over think things. Instead you were open and kept the poem light. Your words are simple yet effective.

    I can see you gave the poem feeling as I felt twinges of sadness as I read.

    Excellent

    5/5

  • 5 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    This
    Is
    AMAZING! :D
    I loved it everythings great fantastic wonderful and wow I loved it,,greatly written and so so very true,,great job I think I'll definitely read more 5/5