The mistake

by nathan   Jan 7, 2012


As we waited it was a mistake
The Japanese came and it was our fate
With the precious test of good and bad
We invaded the land we never had
As days passed solders died
And many men probably cried
As they waited for us on the cliff
They shot many men before they got off the ship
After we climbed the cliff
We were vicious and unloaded our clips
After the war the veterans weren't in fear
But they have the memories which are still here

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  • 11 years ago

    by Guy Epsilon

    Great war poem! I enjoyed the detail.

    One minor spell error, witch should be which.

    Great work!

  • 12 years ago

    by KELLiE SHEA

    I think this is constructed beautifully!!!!! 5/5