Day Dreaming (acrostics)

by Meena Krish   Jan 11, 2012


Distance vanishes between us every time
As we meet in this special place of mine
You and I explore all sides of passion as we

Dance under the golden moonlight with glee,
Rousing a fire of wishes hidden from reality and
Embracing this pleasure we roll on glittering sand,
All night long we unveil our desire and dreams
Molding a portrait of love that hisses with steam,
In my mind this moment plays over and over again
Never ceases as we romance to the tunes of the rain
Gentle lover of my heart, you're the one I daydream about

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  • 5 years ago

    by christopher

    Another great description of love and the art of making love on a glittering beach of sand. written through the theme of a daydream and one moment in time you will never forget. the only word i would have a problem in this poem is the word "hiss"; otherwise the poem is good. can you tell me why you used the word hiss and the meaning for using this word.

  • 5 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Lovely Meena, An Excellent Acrostic!!!

  • 5 years ago

    by Ray Blue

    Great lines~

    Molding a portrait of love that hisses with steam,
    In my mind this moment plays over and over again
    Never ceases as we romance to the tunes of the rain
    Gentle lover of my heart, you're the one I daydream about

    Good job! 5/5!

    Cheers,
    Ray

  • 5 years ago

    by Karla

    Meena, Meena

    I love your pieces.Fabulous!

  • 5 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Oh I love this beautiful acrostic..... very elegant and such a romantic piece.... very very pretty~