Comments : Narcissus Vanity

  • 12 years ago

    by Lostlove1

    Deep and and descriptive for sure! Your words painted awesome imagery MT, esp. this one for me

    where the owls become her angels
    ^^^
    Thanks for posting this slice of darkness, I am enjoying it with my morning coffee. :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Sacrificing her own breathe

    ^ ^ I think you meant breath? innocent typo :)

    demonic passion sang in his eyes, poisonous kisses devoured her soul
    ^^
    I loved that line. It really makes the reader sense the evil that is in this relationship. Your word choice was great here!

    Your last line was very intriguing and almost a little gut wrenching! I loved it!

  • 11 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    He banished her to die alone, where the owls become her angels

    - great line, i do wonder if you have a dictionary up there in your brain that pings out all these words and idea's for your poems!

    xx