Wow this amazing. Excellent job for sure, though im sorry u feel this way

I can feel the monotony viscerly as I read your poem. You managed to engage me right away with the very first line. I ached for all those sailors and what they must go through.
Thank you for the depth of writing and how easily it flows. I am new and learning a bit more about flowing and energy of my writing, so its nice to learn from examples like yours.
I wish you sunshine and fresh pineapple on a beautiful island (i.e. LAND). ;) with lots of comfy beds!!!

Thanks. I can't wait to get back to terra firma.

This is a very insteresting poem, it caught my attention, great poem :)

Navy sucks

Aw..this is sad and touching poem. Its true sometimes we feel as if happiness has boarded a boat and has left us standing on the dock. The truth is happiness comes from being with the ones we love and sharing ourselves with others.

I really like how the depression is showed here.
you imagery is shown very well.