Silent Meadows (lira)

by TJ Arizona Eagle   Jan 16, 2012


Love's moving in the shadows.
Teasing my emotions just beyond my reach.
Flowing through silent meadows,
on the wind kissing my cheek.
Riding on frothy waves caressing the beach.

Lira - 5 lines syllables 7, 11, 7, 7, 11
Rhyme scheme ababb 

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  • 12 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    Wow this is beautiful and amazing a delightful read a greatful write I loved it 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Autuumnbree

    Great, very smooth and touching. I really love the word choice and cant wait to read the whole piece...GP

  • 12 years ago

    by xoxShorteexox

    Beautifully written

  • 12 years ago

    by Meme

    This is a new style to me, but I have to say I really like it. Maybe I should try it sometime.

    Well you delievered your emotions smoothly given the constraints of this style.

    Well done TJ :)

  • 12 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Fantastic piece. So short but so wonderful. I think its interesting how you can write such fabulous pieces with so few words. Excellent piece as usual.

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