Comments : I'm sorry but it can't be...

  • 12 years ago

    by Angel

    Aw this is so sad. I can totally relate.
    -Angel

  • 12 years ago

    by Lauren denbow

    That is so sad but its amazingly written

  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    SAd but loss always is rather we initiate it or the other person. Your rhyme was good , smooth and flowing.
    Good write

  • 12 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Aww Matt this poem was sad and emotional but I really enjoyed it. I like how you wrote this poem and structured it, it was different than most of your poems. I like the 'fast paced' of this poem, it affected me more and left an impact on me as the reader.

    My favorite stanzas were:

    Confused mind,
    broken heart,
    hopeful dream,
    of a new start.

    Shattered dreams,
    torn up letters,
    dusty pictures,
    wishing it was better.

    >> Amazing! Love the imagery.

    Great job Mattie!

  • 12 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Dang. Simple and amazing. Terrific piece

  • 12 years ago

    by xoxShorteexox

    Wow... Sadness powerfully written in few words, cuppycake.

    5/5

    - Shining Star (:

  • 12 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    This is mysterious but great and I loved it excellent write 5/5