Dreamers Rose-Collab with TJ BECKER Arizona Eagle

by Maple Tree   Jan 16, 2012


Collaboration By: TJ BECKER Arizona Eagle and Maple Tree

Candles flicker in dark of night
swirling visions captivate my thoughts
running away to summertime dreams
where dragonfly's sing a melodic tune.

While the fragrance of devotion peak
celestial songs of unbridled temptation
wafting through majestic willow trees
on a breeze of silent longing

Fireflies dance in the light of the moon
a delicate Terpsichore of grace and beauty
celebrating the romantic splendor
of natures seductive images

Waltzing clouds unite with stars
organic shadow lovers smile
crickets whisper in silent serenity
soft whispers sigh in silence
dreamers orchestrate a summer rose kiss.

Thank You TJ for doing this collaboration with me ~

Please visit TJ's Poetry page @

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/nature/poems.php?id=1185677

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  • 5 years ago

    by Lifeless Doll

    Candles flicker in dark of night
    swirling visions captivate my thoughts
    running away to summertime dreams
    where dragonfly's sing a melodic tune.

    - Summertime dreams and dragonfly's fit so well in this stanza to me, the imagery and description of this is wonderful, great stanza.

    While the fragrance of devotion peak
    celestial songs of unbridled temptation
    wafting through majestic willow trees
    on a breeze of silent longing

    - Another beautiful stanza, flawless not much more to say about it

    Fireflies dance in the light of the moon
    a delicate Terpsichore of grace and beauty
    celebrating the romantic splendor
    of natures seductive images

    - Nature is so well described in this poem, trough wonderful words like dancing fireflies :)

    Waltzing clouds unite with stars
    organic shadow lovers smile
    crickets whisper in silent serenity
    soft whispers sigh in silence
    dreamers orchestrate a summer rose kiss.

    - And a beautiful ending for an amazing poem, the last sentence left me in awe, great job overal :)

  • 5 years ago

    by Ruby Red Memories

    I mean:
    "What I love most about this poem is how you and TJ painted such a beautiful picture in my mind." *

  • 5 years ago

    by Ruby Red Memories

    What a lovely collab!

    I think the title was picked well as it beautiful and invites the reader in. It does what a title is meant to do and that is to draw the reader to the poem.

    I think the poem is good in length and each stanza flows nicely from one to other and its hard to tell this is a collab because everything just sits together so well.

    What I love most about this poem is how you and Maple Tree painted such a beautiful picture in my mind.

    I have to agree with Lebonese Phoenix that this piece is enchanting.

    5/5

  • 5 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Collabs are really special. Though they might sound simple but are actually very tough. Merging words, thoughts and creating one special image which keep running on reader's mind all the way...i find it tough and at the same time...interesting.

    Loved the way you both got it perfect.

    all the best and take care

  • Beautifully written; you both have an amazingly talent that works perfectly together that was impressively flawless.

    5/5

    -Heather