Sunshine's Moon

<3 thank you

I can see why Nana is cheered by this piece; its heart warming, enchanting and makes one full of joy. This is a wonderfully crafted work of a veteran. Describing one of natures ever glorious, the 'Sun'. Very peachy and crisp and lovely descriptions of natures art, 'Sunshine'. Your truly an inspiration to all, a perfectionist that has exquisite poetic musings. Appealing to the eyes with beautiful wordings and soothing to the ears, rhyming smoothly. All i want now is to see an illustration to it. Such an exuberating piece of art, I'm inlove with this. Remain blessed Sir Larry, humble respects and gratitude; for sharing such an awesome piece. Peace, bye.

This poem cheers me up, I loveee reading it over and over again.

thank youuuuuuu Larrryyyyyyy

Sunshine, see the moon
high, yellow and waning,
fills night's sky sustaining
lest you sleep too soon.

^Descriptive, picturesque, wonderful start to a beautiful piece.

Do not tarry over books,
find your life love soon
he'll sing a precious tune
while taking in your looks.

^Creative little stanza with a nice use of heads up to your friend.

Brings you in the dark
great fortune and luck,
then, sunny little duck,
you will sing like a lark.

^Stunning, simple end. Excellent job.

The word choice is so simple yet this piece has such amazing imagery and descriptions. It was hopeful and heartfelt.
I love how your rhymes are so smooth and unforced.

5/5

MRK

It made me super happy.i do not see many happy poems most are sad. im definitly hoping i can be a good poet like you one day.