Sunshine's Moon

by Larry Chamberlin   Jan 17, 2012


Sunshine, see the moon
high, yellow and waning,
fills night's sky sustaining
lest you sleep too soon.

Do not tarry over books,
find your life love soon
he'll sing a precious tune
while taking in your looks.

Brings you in the dark
great fortune and luck,
then, sunny little duck,
you will sing like a lark.

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  • 5 years ago

    by Rania Moallem

    <3 thank you

  • 5 years ago

    by Yakori bint Muhammed

    I can see why Nana is cheered by this piece; its heart warming, enchanting and makes one full of joy. This is a wonderfully crafted work of a veteran. Describing one of natures ever glorious, the 'Sun'. Very peachy and crisp and lovely descriptions of natures art, 'Sunshine'. Your truly an inspiration to all, a perfectionist that has exquisite poetic musings. Appealing to the eyes with beautiful wordings and soothing to the ears, rhyming smoothly. All i want now is to see an illustration to it. Such an exuberating piece of art, I'm inlove with this. Remain blessed Sir Larry, humble respects and gratitude; for sharing such an awesome piece. Peace, bye.

  • 5 years ago

    by Rania Moallem

    This poem cheers me up, I loveee reading it over and over again.

    thank youuuuuuu Larrryyyyyyy

  • 5 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Sunshine, see the moon
    high, yellow and waning,
    fills night's sky sustaining
    lest you sleep too soon.

    ^Descriptive, picturesque, wonderful start to a beautiful piece.

    Do not tarry over books,
    find your life love soon
    he'll sing a precious tune
    while taking in your looks.

    ^Creative little stanza with a nice use of heads up to your friend.

    Brings you in the dark
    great fortune and luck,
    then, sunny little duck,
    you will sing like a lark.

    ^Stunning, simple end. Excellent job.

    The word choice is so simple yet this piece has such amazing imagery and descriptions. It was hopeful and heartfelt.
    I love how your rhymes are so smooth and unforced.

    5/5

    MRK

  • 5 years ago

    by shadow

    It made me super happy.i do not see many happy poems most are sad. im definitly hoping i can be a good poet like you one day.