Comments : Seeking love...

  • 12 years ago

    by xoxShorteexox

    Always such sweet and touching poems, Cupcake.
    Just one question at the end of the poem where you write "or is there love not supposed to be?" Is that like is there not supposed to be love for them? Or is their love not supposed to be?

    Just a slight grammatical question, dear.
    5/5 as always with your sweet poetry.
    - Shining Star

  • 12 years ago

    by Meme

    Awwwwww Mattie <3

    I totally and crazily love this poem. Finally I see some non-sad poems from you smiley face :)
    The tone you used throughout the poem was just so sweet and cute.

    Keep it up :)
    SMILE !!

  • 12 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    This is so true an so me but everyone searches and some give up and its really a complicated mess and not like the movies,,longing for the day to find what is rare an true, growing old together and only so few find their love,,great write Mattie I loved it an excellent write. :) 5/5