Mother Bear--Haiku Double

by Acoustic Odyssey   Jan 18, 2012


Wake up mother bear
little ones await your touch
lets not pause til spring

To embrace the eyes
of adventurous babes
with knowledge and warmth

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  • 5 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Very well and so warm written

  • 5 years ago

    by Beautiful Soul

    Wow. I am in awe of this poem. The wording again is very simple but the gentle touch is there. The first line makes me smile because I can imagine any mother with child waking up early. The children are wide awake and the mother a bit grumpy. Haha. I agree with hellon here every child needs their mothers gentle touch. I liked the somewhat double view point here. You have the mother who is sleeping and the cubs awaiting adventure. There is beauty in such a loving poem. Well done.

  • 7 years ago

    by Karla

    Cute piece!Loved it.

  • 7 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Love this form :-)
    You did an excellent job letting us see the images you penned so vividly

  • 7 years ago

    by yogi73

    Very nicely done.

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