Comments : Mother Bear--Haiku Double

  • 7 years ago

    by Hellon

    This was lovely. Be it a bear or a little chicken they all need their mother's touch and leaning experience. Very nice indeed!

  • 7 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Now this double haiku is precious.... and really a delight.... you brought a sweet loving and tender message to light in a beautiful structured form... and thats a gift.... love this piece~

  • 7 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Cute poem buddy ^___^ See me read it!! :p -Nik

  • 7 years ago

    by yogi73

    Very nicely done.

  • 7 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Love this form :-)
    You did an excellent job letting us see the images you penned so vividly

  • 7 years ago

    by Karla

    Cute piece!Loved it.

  • 5 years ago

    by Beautiful Soul

    Wow. I am in awe of this poem. The wording again is very simple but the gentle touch is there. The first line makes me smile because I can imagine any mother with child waking up early. The children are wide awake and the mother a bit grumpy. Haha. I agree with hellon here every child needs their mothers gentle touch. I liked the somewhat double view point here. You have the mother who is sleeping and the cubs awaiting adventure. There is beauty in such a loving poem. Well done.

  • 5 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Very well and so warm written