Comments : A flutter of hope...

  • 12 years ago

    by xoxShorteexox

    Beautifully penned the saddest emotions when it comes to love.. Amazing job, cupcake.
    5/5
    - Shining Star (:

  • 12 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Awww this poem is so sad, but sweet at the same time. I love the title, it was really nicely written. I also reallly loved the first stanza, I could feel the emotions you expressed so well. You told a sad but bittersweet story.

    Really enjoyed your poem. Well done! :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    This is. Beautiful and amazing I loved it an lovely great write with so much passion an desire and emotion very greatly done Mattie full stars from me :) 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    This is one of those poems that make you choke back a sob. "Wow" I sounded girly huh? anyway it was awesome, the ending was perfection.