Comments : Inbetween

  • 12 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Nitin, as I read this poem, I could identify the inner turmoil that I feel day to day and I am sure others do as well. It is like you don't belong anywhere, you are in between spaces. Well done.

  • 12 years ago

    by Paul Gondwe

    This is wonderfully written Nitin.

    Express, let the scars open inside out
    God, if you wish to come back again
    Whisper, tell me what life is all about
    Circus, bunch of people hiding pain

    I really liked this stanza, it had me thinking, like what is the purpose of me being this earth, how can i unravel the mystery behind our existence.

  • 12 years ago

    by Karla

    And then it just feels like
    Silence, screams and wisdom in between.

    It's all what's life is about: silence, screams and wisdom to learn with its ups and downs.We all long for eternity and continuation in time.It is the solace we all have here, that nothing is in vain, that the next life will be better than this one.Scars, hell, flesh and bones are part of the process of being mature and gaining wisdom to live life to the fullest.
    I like to think that I am seeding my existence with something that shall be meaningful when I wake up and find myself in the other side of life. We all have all missions to fullfil. Fate is not smiling all the time. Battles will be many till we fight the last war against ourselves so that we become one with the Light.
    Nitin, it is good to read your inspiring poem and to be here for a few minutes.

  • 12 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    Wow This is very true poem.

    Life is neither easy nor tough its depends only on you how u take it.

    Life is love life is curse.
    Love your life hate your life.

    as what u take its life.

    You have to live

  • 12 years ago

    by Ray Blue

    Wonderful lines~

    "Push, inside hollow mountain called life
    Garden, brings all memories back
    Swim, for eternity to stay alive
    Paint, my life's canvas to black"

    Great work! Perfect harmony. 5/5!

  • 12 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    We are always caught within the web of life and all that comes in between; the good and the bad and a heavy mind struggling to find a solution. There is a voice torn and wanting a resolve..searching for answers desperately.
    Take care..

  • 9 years ago

    by gumshuda

    Oh wowwww.... This is such a beautiful poem. Love this poem.....