Shattered heart

by TJ Arizona Eagle   Jan 25, 2012


Heart shattered by deceptive words.
Tandem lies, misconceptions .
A sharp tongue and a vague mind,
tear apart what was once sanity.
Reality lost in a wave of denial.
Anger, rage and explanations,
fall into the hollows of a shattered heart,
watered by tears of sorrow and regret

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  • 12 years ago

    by Yakori bint Muhammed

    The words convey sadness despairing. Anger rampaging through the short poem with powerful words. I agree with Kiko you spoke but didn't show the emotions showering through the piece. With a 'lil tweak, this poem will really SHATTER minds with eloquence creatively portrayed. Amazing TJ, always on point.

  • 12 years ago

    by Yakori bint Muhammed

    The words convey sadness despairing. Anger rampaging through the short poem with powerful words. I agree with Kiko you spoke but didn't show the emotions showering through the piece. With a 'lil tweak, this poem will really SHATTER minds with eloquence creatively portrayed. Amazing TJ, always on point.

  • 12 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Yes..this does bring back memories of long ago which I don't want to remember and the pain that grew with it. As sad as it is I also find this write strong with anger arising from scars.

  • 12 years ago

    by Sylvia

    This made my heart hurt and brought back memories of the times I felt like this. You captured the emotions and feelings that a person goes through when their hearts are broken by another. Not something I wish to experience again. Well done.

  • 12 years ago

    by Marvellous

    Depressed! Suppressed!! Oppressed!!!OMG...just to mention but a few.. I just wonder WHY??? Whatever has happened, are sharpevilled to victory @ LAST..for it takes fermentation to extract the right brew out of Wheat! However, Thanks for sharing this heart-felt piece.