Sun Eternal Time

by yogi73   Jan 25, 2012


Well I have seen you
for a small while now. But
I don't know you, where you live in my mind
Sun time eternal

Let it shine

I could only move you
I couldn't touch you
I couldn't feel you
I was the fool it paralyzed

Do you see my whisper?
Should I let it out now?
How it can haunt me
You see it running wild.

I'm just a watcher, I see my reflection
and how it lies and lies.
My method how it denies

My eternal life, is for living
How do I die?
I can't stop living.

Let it shine

I wanted to be so, brave and lost,
Let it excite me till I cry and cry
Don't be lost now. Please don't lose me.
My eternal living.

Life lives, beyond intentions. Good intentions were
all I wanted. They didn't escape me.
Not what it receives, but gives. It never dies.

Well I have seen you
for a small while now. But I feel I have
made you tired. I only wanted.
I should move on now.
Sun eternal time.

I'm sorry if I didn't do the things you wanted.
It's only because I love you deeply.
It's the only love I got.

Let it shine.

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  • 11 years ago

    by Yakori bint Muhammed

    I liked that you incorporated nature in describing your love for this person. Using nature as a theme to convey your thoughts, always give an iota of realism. This is romantic and sweet. Your poured out your heart to this subject. You showed how this entity plays an integral factor in your life. The subject makes you feel happy, loved and gives a sense of belonging. You want to be associated with this subjects value and always stay with its blessings.

    You beautifully conveyed how you feel about this entity and how much you're telling him or her that together you'll both sail through happy moments in the light. Together you'll conquer any hindrance that may arise and you'll be each others confidant and support. Love is suppose to be a 2 way lane not 1. You both need to affirm you're each others hero and half, so that you can walk through all pandemonium in ease. Love is a beautiful thing if shared with the fated person.
    Good read, Bon Travail! :) ..

  • 11 years ago

    by Yrem Crish

    Very romantic and sweet...i like the way you deliver your words..but try to look in 3rd stanza..

    >Do you see my whisper?
    i think it is fit if you write--Do you hear my whisper? Just an opinion..it depends on you..but, over all I enjoy reading this piece..good work=)

  • 12 years ago

    by Masha2k

    Good Poem5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    You have done a great job in this poem, keep up the great work.

  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Romance lives with this beauty. Touching, tenderness in each word. The flow was smooth, the intoxication of love makes the reader giddy.
    Very good write

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