My survival

Hhhmm! 'Love is like a plant, you nurture it with water, sun, fertilizer and maintenance. You enjoy it when ripe and it'll be worthwhile in your lifetime. Perhaps not so if you don't shower it with its neccessities'

So same applies to us too. Who loves to be much more pampered than us? We put a lot of efforts in earning the love of someone. As soon as we obtain it, we flung it to the unknown compounds. Hence loosing its once most cherished TLC. It doesn't take much to keep each other for a lifetime. If we can just weigh our imperative needs, it won't be much hustle keeping up to our expectations.

Written from an experienced rich recess mind, ;-).. Great as usual of you. Cheers!

I'm speechless, this is so stunning and creative!! 5/5

I truly love how you expressed your love for, and the need to be loved in return by this person.
So strong, and passionate. Good flow.

5/5

Jenn

I absolutely love the metaphor you used here to explain your love for your man and how he brings you up when you are down, how he is your life line.
I especially like how in the last stanza you very bluntly state, how this is not just a metaphor... but a fact of truth that helps you survive.

It reminds me of the first poem I ever wrote, how you liken your love and relationship to a flower.

I would love it if you read it... it's called

Hourglass.

also... another poem I wrote that uses the wondrous budding of a flower is called

Bloom

your poem here is a five out of five

...im off to read another of yours:)

Wow, this was a great read, a very beatiful poem and i liked everlasting's quote as well. keep up