Kiss me with your Voice.

by Blissful   Jan 26, 2012


Do you taste the words
before they escape your lips?

Color me a tale of their
aftertaste
for I dream to paint a scene
vacant of caramel lies
and savage truths.

I wish to forever nestle
beneath your voice
and entangle in
utterance.

Forever craving the echo
of hello.

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  • 11 years ago

    by X Harlea X

    This was very interesting and different, which catches the attention of the reader. Great job(: ((5))

  • 12 years ago

    by Britt

    I read this last night before falling asleep, and I woke up thinking about "that poem Bliss wrote". It showed up in my dream somewhere, I'm sure of it. Very odd... lol

    I like the idea of tasting your words - people always comment about the bitterness of words, it makes you wonder if those using them really understand the depth, meaning and tone they have behind it, or if they are blind to that kind of pain?

    'for I dream to paint a scene'

    This is my favorite line, I love the rhythm it has, and it is just so catchy. The slight rhyme gives your poem a different feel here, it added a little more emphasis than the rest of the piece. Not sure if that was intended, but I adore it.

    Your title reminds me of the Pisces talk we had yesterday about kissing, haha. I thought it fit well, ohh how this poem is just beautiful. I'm so happy to see you writing (regularly) again :)

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