Wish you were here..but i hope this you hear

by DarkLight   Jan 27, 2012


Time departs from me,
life becomes worthless.
my heart compressed
and my mind oppressed.
your image tattooed on my memory
for four years now
but your loss
pierces my tearing eyes.

And my heart,
it dwells in fear...

Your words echo in my ears,
and in my mind,
I just wish you were near.
It kills me my dear,
so I shall make it clear -
I'll love you always,
for I only knew happiness
when you were here...

I love u,
Bettoniah Abissah..

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  • 3 years ago

    by Trinity Heart

    I want to cry because I hope I'm not like this in four years lol I'm barely new at losing the one I love and I hope and pray I don't hurt for years on end...beautiful my dear and thank you for making something so beautiful :)

    • 3 years ago

      by DarkLight

      @DemonicAngel...
      am sure you will grow out of it by then.
      Thanks.

  • 5 years ago

    by DarkLight

    Thanks

  • 5 years ago

    by Decayed

    This is an edition, I'd like from you to consider. Hope you learn from this, and this is a tip:
    Capitalize all 'i's
    and link your ideas with fanboys or other linkers...
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    Time departs from me,
    life becomes worthless
    my heart compressed
    and mind oppressed,
    your image has been
    tattooed
    in my memory
    for four years now,
    but your loss
    pierces my tearing eyes.

    And my heart,
    it dwells in fear...

    Your words echo in my ears,
    and in my mind, I just
    wish you were near.

    It kills me my dear,
    so I shall make it clear -
    I'll love you always,
    for I only knew happiness
    when you were here...

    i love u,

    ...

  • 5 years ago

    by DarkLight

    K.i wil.

  • 5 years ago

    by Hellon

    After our discussion I'd suggest you put this one forward...It does have a lot of potential...just needs some errors corrected..guess as a new club with new members it could be seen as a project for you all. I will come back to this one...hope someone in you club will help you edit????