Wish you were here..but i hope this you hear

I want to cry because I hope I'm not like this in four years lol I'm barely new at losing the one I love and I hope and pray I don't hurt for years on end...beautiful my dear and thank you for making something so beautiful :)

Thanks

This is an edition, I'd like from you to consider. Hope you learn from this, and this is a tip:
Capitalize all 'i's
and link your ideas with fanboys or other linkers...
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Time departs from me,
life becomes worthless
my heart compressed
and mind oppressed,
your image has been
tattooed
in my memory
for four years now,
but your loss
pierces my tearing eyes.

And my heart,
it dwells in fear...

Your words echo in my ears,
and in my mind, I just
wish you were near.

It kills me my dear,
so I shall make it clear -
I'll love you always,
for I only knew happiness
when you were here...

i love u,

...

K.i wil.

After our discussion I'd suggest you put this one forward...It does have a lot of potential...just needs some errors corrected..guess as a new club with new members it could be seen as a project for you all. I will come back to this one...hope someone in you club will help you edit????