For a second I imagined prince charming riding on a whit horse. Awww this is so sweet TJ. I so love it :)

You're absolutely great when it comes to form poetry, but to be honest, you're always great regardless what it is you write about.
I also like the vivid image you create with your words and I think that this is a really sweet and well written poem! :)

Besides your beautiful style here, which I like because I felt it ended so fast, and I kind of wanted to read more, the shape of this poem has set a completely original scenery with a matchable flow.

You sure paint some beautiful pictures

This looks really nice, nice format T. and nice images too....to be young and in love, ha!

Well done,

5/5 Ingrid

Lovely piece my king.

Absolutely pure and beautiful.... a wonderful image of love and the beauty of holding her close and knowing her heart is yours and you'd give anything. Amazing :)

MaryAnne

Lovely rhythm -smooth ! Well done Tj

Very short but meaningful, great imagery and intensity. Great poem

Wow I love this,,it's very creative and amazing and greatly written and the imagery was fantastic with great longing dreams and greatly to have,,wonderful poem I loved it 5/5

A beautiful sentiment, with a velvet flow, very much enjoyed.

I can see you now with a big smile on your face, lol. This is again one with nature woven in nicely. This makes it different than the normal love poems, your personal signature.