Let me start by saying that I am in love with the title <3

This poem just took me in a fairytale ride. You made sure that you described everything so that the reader would find it easy to imagine the scenery you were in. Also it flowed very smoothly carrying the reader through the sweetness of your emotions.

If this is a fairytale-like poem; then you have captured the most magical moment in it.

Wow this is great and amazing as it beautifully flows in a lovely harmonys embrace :) fantastic job it's a masterpiece as thee entire things is my favorife with amazing wording and imagery ...I loved it :) 5/5

TJ you are an awesome poet!

What an enticing title. Fire becoming your flame. Their heat becomes yours. Brilliant

The images are so beautiful. It makes me feel at peace while reading it.
I could really see everything clearly - the description of nature so well written and all the stanzas flowed well through each other.

The rhyming was great!!!

Well done TJ!!!

I so love your poems!

x

This is awe-inspiring, you're truly a naturalist. The flow is smooth and hums to the ears as one reads. Spell-binding, crystal clear imagery you've shown in this wonderful poem. Makes one appreciate the wonders of nature. Very captivating, this is toooo much, God bless you.

Wow. Well writte. Descriptive emotional. Simple words yet intruging meanings. You always write such vivid pieces and this is no exception, by the way I love this piece. I agree with all that the others have said and must add that I think your works are terrific. 5/5 on this piece of course

Wow TJ, I find your language now to be so strong. It's soothing and fervent at the same time. Nice evolution in style!

This poem is absolutely well written!
With every new poem you amaze me more and that is what I love so much about your writes: that none is like the one before but that you always come up with new idea, methapors and images. Thank you so much for writing this beautiful poem!

The fairytale has come to life .. amazing wording well penned

Bowing to my king.Bravo!

Tj this was fantastic!

How in the world can you turn natures gross bugs and animals and turn them into something so beautiful, so magical?
I absolutely loved this piece, I could picture two lovers strolling along a dark summers night, enjoying the tunes of nature....This was awesome..

I dont so much like rhyming poems anymore, but I loved this. You didnt use common words or a common subject, there was nothing common about this at all...beautiful write my friend!

Ohhhh what a beautiful love poem.... full of beauty and nature... breathtaking ~

/Stars dance silently with billowing clouds of white,
moon hums a lullaby to the sleepy night.
//
ohh what beautiful .. my heart is gushing over the images of moon humming to the night :D sounds so serene and romantic :P

/Puffed up frogs on lily pads jump and croak a song.
A Symphony just for us while waiting on the dawn.

// another stanza .filled with lovely images ... specially frog and lily pads :D

I loved how you blended the beauty of nature with the feeling of love. very beautiful write.

This is beautiful. Nature is a big part of your life and you have woven it in a wonderful love poem, full of emotion, love, tenderness. You do have a way with words that touches the readers heart. You haven't lost your touch at all. Well done.

My, my..how passionate and romantic this read is and I like how you have weaved your feelings of love with nature. It just makes my heart sigh with a smile..really enjoyed this read :)

Wow! What a beautiful romantic love poem.... with beautiful nature imagery. You blew me away with your words and lovely metaphors... I love how you painted the scene before telling the 'love story.'

I love every word, but this stanza was so special to me:

"Crickets tune their fiddles, melodically begin to play.
Lightening bugs begin to boast a magical display.
Puffed up frogs on lily pads jump and croak a song.
A Symphony just for us while waiting on the dawn."

I love this stanza as well:

"Hands entwined we walked along natures carpet at our feet.
Encouragement was whispered for this moment so elite.
As we kissed, the night stood still, silence thick in the air.
We bore our souls before the night eternity declared."

I really love the title as well... I like how it's not obvious in what the poem is about. It was very well written!

Great job!! Beautiful poem <3

I know this is a love poem, but its just so beautifully peaceful... the sights, sounds and smells of nature with love floating in the air... amazing!

Amazing TJ 5/5