My Own Little Paradise

by broken   Jan 31, 2012


Seeing that twinkle in your eyes,
Knowing that we have someone who relies on us.
People may sink down to new lows and say stuff,
But remember baby this is the life we have chosen.
Holding you close, kissing your belly.
Believeing for a moment that the world is ours.
Nine months later....
Side by side we welcome our new little addition,
He/she looks like you, bright green eyes, and that perfect little smile :)
But he/she is just like me when it comes to loving you. Seeing you holding it, hearing you whisper sweet lullabies to it.
Standing in the doorway i realize this is my family, my own little paradise.

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  • 12 years ago

    by broken

    My girlfriend was pregnant but had a miscarriage like maybe four days ago.. so i dont have my little paradise. it was written in my point of view on how it would be if we had a baby.

  • 12 years ago

    by Tomiladeo Seun

    (sigh)-happiness and contentment.Not bad but maybe i will be able to relate with it better when i have my own bundle of joy and somebody to share her(yes,i want girls) with.I envy your little paradise.

  • 12 years ago

    by UndeadGrace

    How loving this poem of yours
    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by broken

    Thank you :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Seeing that twinkle in your eyes,
    Knowing that we have someone who relies on us

    ^ I feel like you should expand into one more sentence after that one. Its kind of fragmented, it just stopped. Or reword it into "We know"..it just started off weird to me...

    The rest of the poem was adorable. I loved the part about the baby has his eyes, but they are just like you when it comes down to loving...that was so sweet and sincere. I loved it!

    Good write!!

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