Comments : Sleepless Nights

  • 12 years ago

    by Xionide

    "So many thoughts in my head
    So many nights of little sleep
    I want to be with you so bad
    But from my lips not even a peep"

    Ive been there before, its a hard pill to swallow thats for sure.

    funny thing aboutthis poem is you speak so much of how you love said person and how you wish it one more time, you show your love throughout this piece yet at the end its like, bam, the change happens. karma gets everyone back at some point in life, that is assured. but dont ever chase a person who doesnt wanna be with you, there's always someone out there thats willing to love us for who we are.

  • 11 years ago

    by Sweetdream

    I really enjoyed the sentiment as well as the rhythmic flow this poem has. Thanks ;)

  • 1 year ago

    by Shokry Al Qubati

    Wow! It's really nice! Heart to heart ??