Comments : Dwindling

  • 12 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    Fireflies emit post traumatic
    notions of existence,
    fleeting glimpses of time
    never to occur in physicality again,
    yet they are carved deep within thought.

    ^^ this is my favorite stanza it was outstanding but wow the entire poem was marvelous and greatly written with amazing wording,,I love ur vocab choice and how creatively u choose to write the poem,,it's a masterpiece and was so good,,fantastic job 5/5