Comments : The Duo

  • 5 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Wow, this poem is so beautiful and mesmerizing. I really enjoyed it from the beginning until the end. You painted romantic imagery that made me imagine a special and lucky couple, and it felt so real and sweet. I love all of your descriptions but I did have a few favorite stanzas:

    Like the moon and the stars
    You find a mate
    To chuckle and sob with
    In glee and gloom
    To simmer and dine with
    To bloom into ripeness

    A tale of two, it chirps
    The euphonic hummingbird
    Sprinkle a dose of romance
    Pour a glass of affection
    Serve a plate of Love
    Digest with a platter of tolerance

    >> I love the idea of sprinkling a dose of romance, pouring a glass of affection ... really nicely written personification.

    This poem was a delight to read and I really enjoyed it. Great job!

  • 5 years ago

    by Yakori bint Muhammed

    Thanks dear for the lovely comment, i appreciate. Hugs

  • 5 years ago

    by Yakori bint Muhammed

    Thanks dear for the lovely comment, i appreciate. Hugs.

  • 5 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    You really put your heart into this poem. Very inspiring and fun to read. Beautiful

  • 5 years ago

    by Yakori bint Muhammed

    Thanks for the assuring comment, i appreciate.

  • 5 years ago

    by Yakori bint Muhammed

    How thoughtful of you to stop by berry sister, much much appreciated. With love ;-) ..

  • 5 years ago

    by christopher

    Yeah i like it however the poem lacks a constant running flowing style which only comes with writing more and learning from errors. still the ideas are there and improving good luck

  • 5 years ago

    by Yakori bint Muhammed

    Thanks for your comment, it's encouraging. Blessings..