Comments : Viscaria

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    Oh I love this!!!

    I love nature poems and this one is awesome.

    nature applauds
    granting me an Invitation to dance....
    ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
    I love how you say that nature grants you an invitation. It makes me think of how we can respect nature.

    Awesome!

    x

  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Brilliant images, vibrant and clear . Fluid wording all around great write

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    You know, I'm fascinated by your used of words. As I read it every words seems to be in the right place. Well done.

  • 12 years ago

    by Ms Happiness

    Amazing poem:) great work 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    The difference between this and BLANK is gigantic.

    This surely is fantastic!

  • 12 years ago

    by Jenni

    I love your nature poems because they show your tight bond to it. You do not describe a scenery, but you literally create it with your words. To be honest I did not want this poem to stop and even if it ended, it still continued in my mind for a while, if that makes any sense.

  • 12 years ago

    by Mostafa

    I loved the description, short and simple yet wonderful : )
    well done

  • 12 years ago

    by Karla

    Sista, The Goddess is proud of you. What you write is always awesome.

  • 12 years ago

    by Yakori bint Muhammed

    This is so marvelous, entails vivid imagery. I love how you used natures finest to describe the tune of music. Short but exquisitely written. Much blessings to you :-).

  • 12 years ago

    by alka mendiratta

    A soul truly in love with nature can compose such a work
    Keep going.God bless.