Wonderful tonight

by TJ Arizona Eagle   Feb 4, 2012


A dress of silk
clings seductivly
on a delicate frame.

Intoxicating fragrance
of feminity stimulating
my senses
.
She begins to speak
but I hear only the pounding
of my heart

Choking out words
slightly above a whisper
"you look wonderful tonight"

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  • 12 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Wow! TJ, this poem took my breath away... it was phenomenal...

    It was simple yet so effective and the scene you expressed was really lovely and easy to imagine. I really like your choice of words, they fit perfectly with this poem.

    Beautiful poem!! =D

  • 12 years ago

    by Alisha Khan

    Very pleasing to read, fresh ,new , I'm loving it . nice vibe, keep writing .

  • 12 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    Wow this is wonderful and a great write,,a very delightful piece with great imagery,,I loved it fantastic job 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    TJ your poem is very sensual and sexy

    Brilliant!

    x

  • 12 years ago

    by Meme

    I love it love it love it !!!

    You penned a spectacular piece, I just couldnt help but to smile as I went through it. This is the time of poems I personaly love reading.

    Awesome job :)

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