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by x3 TinyDancer3000 x3 Feb 5, 2012
Dark, fantasy /
A thin line of scarlet appears
On the surface of her skin.
She watches the red river
Trickle down her pale wrist.
The only way she knows how
To control her own pain is
Making herself bleed the blood
That runs through her veins.
Wow, blew me away!!! 100/100
I like this.....really good...tells a story in only a few words..great write..5/5
by Yrem Crish
Good job. This is amazing piece. I like how you write it. 5/5
"Making herself bleed the blood"
I love this part, but I dunno how to explain why.
This is really well-written. I just hope all is well with you. Keep writing :) 5/5