Attempted Suicide [Short]

by x3 TinyDancer3000 x3   Feb 5, 2012

A thin line of scarlet appears
On the surface of her skin.
She watches the red river
Trickle down her pale wrist.

The only way she knows how
To control her own pain is
Making herself bleed the blood
That runs through her veins.


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  • 4 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    Wow, blew me away!!! 100/100

  • 5 years ago

    by Aubrey

    I like this.....really good...tells a story in only a few words..great write..5/5

  • 6 years ago

    by Yrem Crish

    Good job. This is amazing piece. I like how you write it. 5/5

  • 6 years ago

    by Xanthe

    "Making herself bleed the blood"
    I love this part, but I dunno how to explain why.

    This is really well-written. I just hope all is well with you. Keep writing :) 5/5