Comments : Looting the Void

  • 9 years ago

    by BlueJay

    I really like the opening line the imagery was amazing and it made me extremely curious as to how you were going to go about writing the rest of the piece. besides pale shadows is an uncommon description and it really stood out. you never let me down in the piece. you kept that curiosity stirring in me and told a wonderful yet heartbreaking story. I really love the style you chose. Great write.