Awwww, I love this one soooo much Sara.

The things we are willing to do or sacrifice for the one we love. We really could do the impossible if it means we can be with them. A piece that alot of people can relate to; the simplicity of the words and warmth of the emotions are just perfect.

Well done dear :)

I can only agree with gIrl this was a simple but touching piece. It was worded with warmth and emotional bliss..excellent

What a heartfelt piece this is..... ohhhh how beautiful!!! I love every line....so pretty!

Nice

LOVED IT!

Written from the heart and so direct.

Love the meaning and think you wrote it so well!!!

Brilliant

x

Maximum tymz it so happenz dat d oder person for whom we dream of, think of, wish, pray n well hav fallen in un-conditional luv wid , pity to state that they r not at all interested in such wonderful things, they seem to be least bothered or act to be too busy wid sum1 else dat our feelings have least effect or no effect on dose persons, n we awl can relate to this sweet truthful poem of urs, excellent write with a still wonderful meaning, keep it up, n nyc to lrn dat d title was suggested by our matured poetess n helpin fren... gIrL.

Keep it up, excellent write.

This was so freaking cute! I loved this piece as I do anything you write.

Usually, I would be so annoyed and hate how you over used "I", but that was the only way to write this poem. You were saying everything you could do but you were afraid of the other persons reaction....We are all a little timid when it comes down to stuff like that, you just have to find out what that person wants from you...

This was a really emotional piece, truly. You could tell you are willing to do anything which shows how much you truly do love this person. Great write!

Sarah ;)
This is amazing.
When I reached the line of cooking I felt hungry, :P

you mean Chef RAMZY?????? omg, if you mean him then hahahah :P nice incorporation.

totally brilliant!

I could write you a hundred-page letter,
but that still wouldn't convey enough

Your this line is perfect. When we fall in love can say every thing expect three words.

ILU

Wow, Sara... Usually... I don't care for repetitive lines, but this one was so well written... I couldn't stop reading until it ended. Each line painted a fanstatic image and by then end, you had me so caught up in each line; amazing job.

5/5

-Heather

Awww! this is so adorable and cute. To do all you want to for the cause of love. What venture one will partake in trying to please your lady or guy. However its not what you do that matters, rather for your acts to be appreciated and reciprocated just to show how much you cherish been with the person. I love how the flow rises on smoothly taking you on a lyrical read. Very intoxicating dear, such sweet words let out. I likey, ;-). blessings...

I loved this poem! :) I thought that the way you described the lengths you wouls go to just to make the one you love happy & that'd you'd try to do everything you possibly had in your power to do it, this was very well expressed and conveyed true emotion that is relatable to, nice write once again. :)